Top Quality Character Dump: Girls' Page (One Guy)

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Usually, I probably shouldn't be posting so many incomplete pictures, but this picture looks complete, and I have neat stuff to add to it, so, since it's going to have a lot going on in the end, I think I'd like to test and upload it now to see what comments it gets, then totally finish it and post that result along with the guys' page dump soon, and then any new Comments can pertain to what will effectively be a new drawing.

I worked super hard on this.

I fixed some problems that made Todd look weird in the sketch, so y'all can see the improvement. Hint: I fixed his eyes.

I did this on higher quality paper than I normally use, so that was a [re]learning experience. I haven't used that paper since I worked on the 2014 calendar. 
And yes, there are comic notes written down there. The border lines are drawn because this paper is too big to fully scan, so that area was supposed to be "out of bounds", but then I ended up putting feet down there, and... well, I'll see how tall April and Aora come out above and see if the feet (and the notes) will fit in in the end.

Oh yeah. And in this picture, Todd and Shaza are together (obviously), and A & A are also together, but the other girl is just epically yawning in a separate universe that just happens to be on the same paper as the other two spaces and have the same light source Todd and Shaza got.

The top pair look terrible, but that was the only way they could have turned out, given how ambitious their drawing was, so I'm okay with them. :/